Tuesday, 11 February 2014

Three syllable meter: Anapest and Dactyl

This is the last set of metrical foot I'll make you do: Anapest and Dactyl.

This is anapest: ˘ ˘ ¯
Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house
The Destruction of Sennacherib
by
Lord Byron
  The Assyrian came down like the wolf on the fold,
And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold;
And the sheen of their spears was like stars on the sea,
When the blue wave rolls nightly on deep Galilee.
Like the leaves of the forest when Summer is green,
That host with their banners at sunset were seen:
Like the leaves of the forest when Autumn hath blown,
That host on the morrow lay withered and strown.

For the Angel of Death spread his wings on the blast,
And breathed in the face of the foe as he passed;
And the eyes of the sleepers waxed deadly and chill,
And their hearts but once heaved, and for ever grew still!

And there lay the steed with his nostril all wide,
But through it there rolled not the breath of his pride;
And the foam of his gasping lay white on the turf,
And cold as the spray of the rock-beating surf.

And there lay the rider distorted and pale,
With the dew on his brow, and the rust on his mail:
And the tents were all silent, the banners alone,
The lances unlifted, the trumpet unblown.

And the widows of Ashur are loud in their wail,
And the idols are broke in the temple of Baal;
And the might of the Gentile, unsmote by the sword,
Hath melted like snow in the glance of the Lord!

This is dactyl: ¯ ˘ ˘


Just for a handful of silver he left us
Just for a riband to stick in his coat - Robert Browning
The Charge of the Light Brigade
by
Alfred, Lord Tennyson

Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!
"Charge for the guns!" he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

"Forward, the Light Brigade!"
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldier knew
Someone had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
Their's not to reason why,
Their's but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.


Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.

Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air,
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.

Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.

When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honor the charge they made,
Honor the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred. 

Here is a great page of notes for different meters.

Your job is eight to sixteen lines (two to four quatrains, if quatrains; but you can do stanzas of a different number than four lines, if you wish): Dactyl and/or Anapest.  You do not need to do both types.  Rhyme doesn't matter, but is a bonus; any rhyme pattern should match the rhythm pattern.  You can mix rhythms within a stanza, but label clearly.

Done by Monday before school, posted here and printed onto paper.  Labelled clearly, double spaced for marking.

19 comments:

  1. Love
    I was in love at a time in Ish.
    We had a great relationship too.
    It was as beautiful as a blooming rose blew.
    We had an awful lot of fun too.
    Broken Heart
    When your heart gets broken like a shattering glass.
    Your tears start flowing like a waterfall.
    When you look down, a puddle appears on the floor.
    You don’t understand how it feels like.

    O.S.

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  2. C.I.S

    Lawrence

    We are the student of a funny school

    Everything here will be usually new

    Everyone here will be always so glad

    Which funny school is it? It’s CIS!


    Japanese, Socials and Maths and the Art

    English and Gym Sports and that is all

    Now, I like English and Gym Sports the most

    Which one do you like the most?

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  3. The thing I hate

    I hate demonic
    Possession because
    They can control your body
    And you will faint as if were dying

    I hate and cant
    Trust is okiku
    Mystery dolls
    Its os so creepy

    I hate tap worms
    Because it is
    Gross and it makes
    Me want to puke

    I hate when
    People force me
    To do stuff that
    I don’t want to do
    E.A

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  4. Best friend Time! (Anapest)

    Jake the dog and Finn the human.

    They are best friends so do we?

    You love me and I love you.

    Sugar and everything nice.

    We often fight but that’s so normal

    Tears, frown and everything sad.

    But love each other the most of the time.

    Best friends forever infinity beyond.

    H.K

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  5. Sochi Olympics; Dactyl
    Sochi Olympics have started last week,
    Everyone talking about all the games,
    All the post on facebook talking ‘bout them,
    Hopefully everyone has a good time.

    Good Morning; Dactyl
    Good morning have a tea, isn’t it good,
    Are you still falling asleep,
    Hopefully you have a very good day,
    Off you go towards your school
    KS

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  6. The thing I hate
    E A
    FIXED

    I hate demonic
    Possession because
    They can control your body
    And you will faint as if were dying

    I can’t
    Trust Okiku
    Mystery dolls
    It is so creepy

    I hate tap worms
    Because it is
    Gross and it makes me
    want to puke

    I hate when
    People force me to
    Do stuff that
    I don’t want to do

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  7. Dactyl

    Sweden and Japan are countries
    But very different countries

    Sweden has snow and potatoes
    Japan is hot and has rise

    Both are difficult languages
    Swedish has difficult sounds
    Japan has difficult alphabet

    So far away from each other
    Though both are wonderful homes

    H.E

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  8. Canada (Dactyl) M.Y.

    Flying to Canada with morning plane
    It`s kind of cold in Japan today too
    I had to wait long to ride in the plane
    I rode the plane too long, twelve hours total
    I was on plane alone without my friends
    But on the plane I had two seats for me
    I read a book at night it was so fun
    I felt so weird when the plane hovered down
    I had hard time to find father of cousin
    I told them I’m really am sleepy now
    They had a car for me waiting outside
    They told me I had to go to the house
    I went to house that my grandpa lives in
    Canada was so fun for sightseeing
    I miss my Canadian family
    But I still have to go home to Japan.

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  9. Memory of Maldives (Dactyl)

    G.K.

    I’m gonna go to the Maldives tonight.
    I have to pack the things very quickly.
    Seeing the view of Maldives was so awesome.
    When I just landed I felt so surprised.
    I feel like sharks tries to bite my head off.
    I was so scared I ran back to my mom.
    In my hotel I will jump on the bed.
    Next day I rode marine bike with my dad.
    It was so rough, almost fell in the sea.
    Glad I survived from the horrible ride.
    But I still wanna go to the Maldives.

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  10. My phone (Dactyl)

    I have iPhone4s that has many problems.
    When I was ten years old, I got it from parents.
    People started to use 5, 5s or 5c.
    My friends are using 5, 5s or 5c.

    At the store there aren’t many iPhone4s case.
    Also the battery’s out when it is twenty percent.
    Sometimes battery decreases fifty to forty.
    There’re many problems. But I like my iPhone.

    M.S

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  12. In the dark of the night,
    In the howling of wind,
    Up the tree birds tweeting
    Everyone in bed sleeping

    In the fine morning,
    The birds flying and singing
    Falling snow from the sky
    Filling the city with white.

    Look at her face
    Under the amazing snow,
    I can’t believe
    She is so gorgeous!

    S.T

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    1. Life And How Is It (Anapest)

      In the dark of the night,
      In the howling of wind,
      Up the tree birds tweeting
      Everyone in bed sleeping

      In the fine morning,
      The birds flying and singing
      Falling snow from the sky
      Filling the city with white.

      Gorgeous Face (Anapest

      Look at her face
      Under the amazing snow,
      I can’t believe
      She is so gorgeous!

      S.T

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  13. Mark macmorris is the best snowboarder
    He is handsome and has nice deep voice
    Which is my favourite
    He won bronze medal in sochi
    And he is from Canada
    Oneday I will meet him
    And get his autograph
    Or maybe talk to him
    That is my dream, dreams come ture
    Don’t give up
    Don’t stop believe in


    IK

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  14. My Friends (All Dactyl)

    How can you be so rude?
    How can you be so bad?
    How can you act so weird?
    How can you be like that?

    Think about how I feel.
    Think before doing things?
    Think about Pakistan.
    You’re representing it.

    Know what you’re gonna say.
    Know when you shouldn’t speak.
    Quiet down just for once.
    Please my friend, close your mouth.

    Who is the teacher here?
    You are still young for it.
    Listen to teachers, you.
    Curious northern-guy.

    S.Y

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  15. Fox
    What should we make for him?
    Where we can find a fox?
    They are small.
    So we can’t see them mostly.
    Fox is really small.
    Fox can leave in the forest.
    Fox can in the house.
    We should present them sweets and hug.
    Make them happy.

    E.I

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  16. How I became more expressive.
    I can sing, sing in the rain all night.
    They helped me, how I can bring out myself.
    I can sing in home a lot.
    I can dance in my lesson

    I became expressive then before.
    Everyone cheered me with our teacher.
    That why I danced in concert
    That why I can sing in karaoke.

    Thanks you everyone
    Thank you my friends
    Thanks you very much.
    Thanks you to family

    I’m still a shy girl, but better then before.
    Thanks to family too
    Thanks to grade six teacher.
    I want to be expressive as Sora.

    N.K

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  17. Music; Anapest

    I love music that always takes me to a world,
    so that no one can come or disturb while I’m curled.
    It helps me forget everything thats happening,
    just lay down on the floor and keep on listening.

    Dreams; Dactyl

    Dreams are the best thing in the world for me,
    you don’t know whether you see or can’t see.
    There are a lot of reasons I like dreams,
    but the biggest is it’s not what it seems.

    M.B.

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