Thursday, 7 November 2013

HS K, also edited too much.

Sweets to green
                                                                                                              
                  There was a girl that was 17 called Terry Hart. She loved chocolate. But she did not have the taste that she wanted so she decided to make one. She became fatter every day. Every day she ditched school and ate chocolate until she got the taste that she wanted.
Five years later she made a chocolate bar that was filled with crushed peppermint candy, wasabi paste, worm gummies, glanced mozzarella cheese, bubble gum, peanut butter, strawberry jam and kimchi. She owned her own store named terry hart’s wonderful chocolate bars.
                              Everyday a lot of people came to terry’s store. At that time she weight 220kg. One day she saw a handsome man buying her products. Terry fell in love with him. Then Terry found out that he was the owner of the famous salad bar called green yum. She heard from her friend that his name was Collin Monroe.  She decided to go on a diet to make him fall in love with Terry.
 She tried everything to lose weight but everything didn’t work. She realized that maybe if she gave Collin a delicious dish he would fall in love with her. She bought a farm and she began to plant vegetables.  She was so tired because she didn’t experienced this before that she couldn’t eat. The next day she watered the plants every day. Terry ate fresh salad and vegetables to give Collin a very enjoyable dish. After one year Terry weigh 45 kilograms. She loosed 175 kilogram in one year.
 Terry saw Collin at her store so she invited Collin to her house. Collin came and when he ate her salad his eyes was full with joy because he never ate this kind of delicious salad before. Three years later Collin and Terry got married.

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