Tuesday, 5 November 2013

HS' Narrative


Sweets to green
 
                  There was a girl that was 17 called Terry Hart. She was kind, had courtesy, smart and a pretty girl. She loved candies and chocolate. But she did not have the taste that she wanted. So she decided to make a candy that she wanted it to taste like. Every day she ate chocolate and candy every day she became fatter and fatter but she didn’t care. Every day she ditched school and went to the supermarket and buy 100 simple chocolate bars. She combined apple and chocolate, black pepper and chocolate, shrimp with chocolate, spaghetti with chocolate. Everything was good but quite not her taste that she wanted it to be.  
Five years later she made a chocolate bar that was filled with crushed peppermint candy, wasabi paste, worm gummies, glanced mozzarella cheese, bubble gum, peanut butter, strawberry jam and kimchi. She was now a president of the most famous chocolate store or factory in the world named Terry Harts terrific chocolate thanks for my wonderful taste buds.
                              That combination was a big hit. Everyday millions of people around the world came to eat her chocolate. Terry became a billionaire. Terry made other chocolate bars like meatball with chocolate and she called it meatball chocolate bar. That was also a great hit. But she was so fat she weighed 220 kilograms.  No one wanted to marry her. Even though she was very nice. One day when Terry went to her store. She saw a handsome man buying her products. Terry fell in love with that men and she wanted to know more about him. Then Terry found out that he was the owner of the famous salad bar restaurant called green yum yum. She also knew that his name was Collin Monroe. She fell in love with him. But she was extremely fat so she decided to go on a diet.
 
 She worked 3 months of running but that didn’t work because she only ran three minutes every day. She tried no eating for a day but it didn’t work. She tried everything but that all didn’t work. One day when she was eating a green gummy worm she thought he would maybe fall in love with me when I give him a dish of fresh homemade salad. She bought a farm and she began to plant lettuce, tomato, corn and onions. It took 3 hours to plant each of the seeds. She was too sweaty and she was so tired that she couldn’t eat. The next day she watered the plants every day. Terry ate fresh salad and vegetables to give Collin a very enjoyable dish. After one year Terry weigh 45 kilograms. She loosed 175 kilograms in three hundred and thirty five days. (365). that day was when all of her vegetable grew. When
 Terry was walking down the street he saw Collin so she ran to him and said come over to my house this evening. Collin said yes. Terry ran back to her house and cleaned and prepared her salad.
That evening when Collin came to Terry’s house she gave Collin a salad with fresh lettuce, tomato, corn and croutons with Italian dressing on top. When Collin ate his first bite he was amazed because he never ate this kind of fresh salad before he saw cupids throwing heart shaped arrows to him. Collin was very amazed and fell in love with Terry.
 Three years later they got married and had three kids called Brooke, Paige and Josh. They lived happily ever after until they died the end.

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