Thursday, 7 November 2013

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            A man called Gravity was in Earth. He was a guy who always saves people by moving things around. He was living in Earth for many years after there was a big battle against evil and justice.
            In 20XX, the world started to move again. A kid named Benjamin Gravity lived on America. He was a kid and went to an ordinary school. He did not have many friends, because he was kind of a nerd than you expect. He was a nerd on math and science. After he came back home from his school, he went to his room and went to do his homework. He opened the textbook and saw How to Make Gravity He went back of the page and saw that this textbook was not from school. It was from planet Jupiter.
            He began to think hard and looked at the textbook again. It said that you will have to do this alone, because he was the representative of planet Earth and had the most gravity on Earth. He did not get this and thought that it may become true. So, he waited and looked at the window. It was dark.... but the time in clock said 3 pm. He looked up. He saw a spaceship. It was written, Gravity Force Central 1. He thought it was time to go now.
            Benjamin Gravity went into the spaceship. He was the only one who was in it. Then, the spaceship began to move slowly and went to another place. It was space. He jumped out he was able to move freely, because he was the first Gravity man ever. The creatures, which were about 2000 of them, came. Now he understood that it was the same thing that happened in his dream. The battle begins.



            A legendary man called Gravity was here on Earth. He was a guy who always saves people by moving things around freely. He was living on Earth for many years after there was a big battle against evil and justice.
            In 20XX, the world started to move again a little by little. A kid named Benjamin Gravity lived on 219street, America. He was an ordinary kid and went to an ordinary school. He did not have many friends, because he was kind of a nerd than you expect. He was a nerd on math and science. After he came back home from his school, he went to his room and went to do his homework. He opened the textbook and saw How to Make Gravity He went back of the page and saw that this textbook was not from school. It was from planet Jupiter.
            He began to think hard and looked at the textbook again. It said that you will have to do this alone, because he was the representative of planet Earth and had the most gravity on Earth. He did not get this and thought that it may become true. So, he waited and looked at the window. It was dark.... but the time in clock said 3 pm. He looked up. He saw a spaceship. It was written, Gravity Force Central 1. He thought it was time to go now.
            Benjamin Gravity went into the spaceship. He was the only one who was in it. Then, the spaceship began to move slowly and went to another place. It was space. He jumped out he was able to move freely, because he was the first Gravity man ever. The creatures, which were about 2000 of them, came. Now he understood that it was the same thing that happened in his dream. The battle begins.


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