Thursday, 7 November 2013

N K, finished.

309 to 204: good job.

     Shin was waiting under a tree; suddenly he saw an old car that was parking. There was no driver, and then he heard a strange sound. He saw somebody walking around. When he looked up, that man didn’t have a head! He wanted to run away, but he promised Kent. He gets a deep breath, and then he went away. Then Kent was running toward Shin. They went to an old house.
     They went in but there was nothing except a bin, Kent took a bin. There was blue water inside, Kent licked it!! Then he saw ghosts around them, then that bin disappeared he took Shin’s hand and walked toward. Shin didn’t know why he won’t go back to home. Shin suddenly felt cold hands, which were Kent’s hand then he fill down.
     When Kent opened his eyes he was in hospital. Kent saw Shin. He had a lot of stenches in his body. Shin was crying because he can’t save Kent, but Kent wasn’t wired about it.
     Three month later Shin and Kent get out from hospital, and they told their story in old house. Everyone was excited but that building got crashed. Now Shin and Kent was famous in their school.



     Shin was waiting under a tree; suddenly he saw an old car that was parking. There was no driver inside he looked around, but there was nothing like a market or store he heard something strange. He hides behind a tree someone came out and he shouted, “Hey, Ken…..t?” his hight was too hight for Kent and it was stinky like a blood when he looked up that man didn’t have a head. It was a headless ghost he wanted to run away, but he promised to Kent that he will help him. He get a deep breath and what him to drive away. Then he saw Kent running toward him, Kent slept a little bit so he was late. Now they started to go into an old house.
     They went in but there was nothing except a green bin, Kent looked at that bin. He notice that it wasn’t a poison so he licked it then he could see a ghost around him, then that bin disappeared he took Shin’s hand and walked to see more ghosts. Shin asked him, “If you can see a ghost why don’t we go home and play video game?” Kent didn’t answer. Shin walked together with Kent, Shin suddenly felt cold hands, which were Kent’s hand then he fill down. Shin carried him and get out from an old house.

     When Kent opened his eyes there was Kent’s parents and Shin, Kent was surprised with Shins hurts there was a lot of stenches in his body. Shin was crying that he couldn’t save the promise and he was happy because didn’t die.
     Three month later Shin and Kent get out from hospital and talked about an old house. Everyone was excited but that building got crashed. Since then everyone called Shin, “A wild ghost hunter”, and Kent was called, “Genius ghost scientist”.


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