Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Well S Y, this will take less time to read.

From 304 to 157 words: almost half cut


            Next, it was supposed to be music but the teacher said you can rest because Alex came. After lunch, girls were talking nonsense about Alex. How tall and handsome he looks. At that moment, I caught Alex staring at me. His face reddens and he turns back. Then, girls started talking about Alex liking me…I thought it was true.

            THEY CAUGHT ME! NOW THEY WILL KNOW I LIKE ANGELINA! It’s all right. Few days later, I started to be nice to her. I answered every question for her and I smiled at her a lot. She seemed to like it.

            Why is Alex nice to me? My friends said Alex likes me. Now I started believing it. When I came back to my home, I sat on my bed and thought about Alex. Why Alex? I don’t like him. I don’t…I like Alex… No! Forget about Alex, but I can’t… I don’t know why… is this love?



Angelina: After this, it was supposed to be music, but the teacher said you can rest, because Alex came. Everyone was happy, because our music teacher was scary. In lunch time, other girls were talking about Alex. How tall he was, how handsome he was, how cool he looks. I DON’T ARGEE WITH THE GIRLS. It was nonsense. And that was the time I caught him staring at me. His face reddens and he turns back. Huh, that’s weird? Then, other girls started talking about Alex and me. They think Alex likes me…I actually thought that it was true also.

            Alex: OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! THEY CAUGHT ME!!!!!!! NOW THEY WILL KNOW THAT I LIKE ANGELINA!!!!!! Act normal, act normal. Nobody saw me, it’s all right.

Alex: For the next few days, I started to be nice to her. I don’t know why, but I just wanted to. I answered every single question for her, I defended her from other boys, and I smiled at her a lot. She seemed to like it. So, I tried to be nice to her. I hope she liked it.

            Angelina: Okay????? I don’t know why Alex is being nice to me????? I asked my friends, and they all said Alex likes me. Now I started believing it. When I came back to my home, I just sat on my bed and thought about nothing. But, Alex kept coming out in my mind. What happened to me? I don’t like Alex. I don’t like him. I don’t like… don’t like… like… like… I like Alex… Oh my god what am I talking about! Forget about Alex, forget, forget… can’t forget about him… I don’t know why… is this love? Because I feel so light and happy now!

 

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