Tuesday, 5 November 2013

Y T's Narrative


The Secret Door                

                                                                                                                             Science/ Adventure

 

   There was one girl named Emily. She was 12 years old and lived in Toronto, Canada. Every day, she went to school and had fun. Her favorite thing to do was to explore. She wanted to go on a big adventure.  One day, when Emily came back from the school, her mom shouted, “Clean up your room!” Emily replied “O.K, O.K, O.K” She went to her room, and saw that it was so messy. Why do I need to clean this room? Emily was asking to herself while she was cleaning. She moved the desk away to clean the floor. Then, she saw a door. Emily tried to open the door. She wanted to do an adventure. At the same time, she remembers that her mother saying to clean her room. But, she couldn’t hold her patience and she opened the door. Emily was thinking if she really wanted to go or not. “Try your best and do what you want!” Emily heard a voice in her mind and remembered what the teacher said to her. So while Emily was cleaning the floor, she finds another door. “What’s this?” she asked to her self again. Suddenly, Emily’s mom came into the room. Her mom shouted “Did you clean up your room?” “Yes! Can’t you see it?” Emily shouted back. Then mother replied, “I can see it! Don’t say like that to your mother Emily. Get back to cleaning.” Then mother shut the door, SLAM. Emily went back into the door. There was a ladder, so she went down, and came to a room. “Wow” Emily almost screamed. There were so many doors all around the room. “What is this door? Can I go in?” Emily had so many questions. She picked a door that was closest to her. In the top of the door, it was written “The Future World”. Emily’s hand was shivering and shivered as she reached the door knob. She holds the door knob and twisted it. Opening slowly, Emily went in the door.

Suddenly, the room got lighter. Boom! “It’s bright” Emily complained. “Wow” Emily’s emotions changed. In front of her eyes, there was a room that Emily was dreaming to live. She was in the future. One girl entered the room. The girl was surprised. She said to Emily nicely, “Hello, My name is Emma.” Emily was speechless. Emma was wearing a futuristic blue suit. It was like a diving suit. Emily started to talk, “Hi, my name is Emily. Where is here?” Emma answered, “You are in the future. You came here by closing the door. Correct?” “Yes. But how did you know?” Emily was so confused  “Oh, Sorry I forgot to explain about it. It will be a long story, but my grand father made this door for fun. He loves to make things.” “Wow! Your grand father made this door?” asked Emily. “Yes, he did. Do you want to see more doors in that room?” Emma asked Emily. “ Yes! Yes! I want to see more.” Emily was so excited. Emma opens the door and went inside into the darkness. BOOM! It was that room that Emily had came before, where there were so many doors. Emma stood in front of the door it was written “The Animal World” Emily chassed Emma and stood in front of a door. “Are we going here?” asked Emily. “Yes,” answered Emma as usual. They opened the door and went in. When walking straight into the darkness, they arrived to a jungle.

There were so many animals there all looking at the girls! They look like human, but they are animals. Suddenly, the animals started running towards them. “Help me!” screamed Emily. Emma took out a badge from her pocket. “Use this!” Emma shouted. Emily puts on the badge. Suddenly, the animal stopped chasing them. Emily knows what they were trying to say and they knew what Emily was saying. “How do they know what I’m speaking?” Emily asked to Emma. “You put a badge. This badge translates automatically to two languages.” Emma explained. Emma started to speak to the animals.  “Hi, my name is Emma. Nice to meet you.” Emma spoke as normal. One of the animal answered “Hi, welcome to our world. You know what we are talking?” “Yes” replied Emma. Emily couldn’t believe she was having this conversation. The animal went and Emily and Emma went to see what the animal world looked like. They swigged with ropes, raced, swimed in the lake, and had fun. Then Emma said, “We went out of the jungle.” Emily stopped running. Emily couldn’t say anything. It was amazing. The town was full with solar panels. They weren’t using trees at all. They went down to the town. There were many animals that lived there. Everyone was doing normal things like humans. While they were seeing the town, the animal president was having a conference. Emily went to a shopping and Emma was finding a place to sleep at night. At the night, Emma brings out from her pocket a squashed house. Then she started to brow it with a machine. “Finished” Emma says. “Is this a house?” Emily asked. “Yes. A camping house. There are two rooms, so I will sleep in the right side and you sleep the left side. There was a bed, toilet, table, foods, clothes, and bathroom. It was enough for camping. “Good night” they both said at the same time.

 

   At the morning, they ate an omelet. This omelet was a little different with 2013 where Emily lives, but the taste was same. Suddenly Emily wanted to go back to her own house. Still Emily didn’t say to Emma because she wanted to know more things on animal world.  They went outside the house. “ Help! Help!” Suddenly when they went outside, they were get caught. They were horse and wolf. Emily and Emma got scared. Emily tried to get something from the pocket, but she couldn’t. The rope was in the way. The house and wolf put them down. They were in a room. Emma tried to take out the rope but they couldn’t. Someone came into the room. “Hallo, you guys. Welcome to Animals World” the lion said. “ I’m the president of this world.” “President? Why are you trying to do to us?” asked Emily. “Yes I’m the president. If you want to know the second question, see this.” The president pushes a remount button. A big television came down. The television was big as the room wall. “Look at this. We had made a weapon’s.” The president shouted. “ Why?” Emma asked. “ We, the animals are going to have get the whole earth. We are going to have the earth for the animals!” the President. “Why you are doing this?” Emily complained. “You guys, the human were cutting down the trees, burning the forest, making gas and many thing. Now, we don’t have space to live. We need to have the whole world and make the world a better place.” The president says to Emily and Emma. Emma and Emily couldn’t say any thing. The president continued, " In six hour we are going to attack the earth. In 2013 the earth will be ours." Emma notices that this earth, where they were trying to attack was were Emily lives now. "It's your world" Emma whispered to Emily. "Yes. I know it." Emily panicked. The president said " Good luck! I am going come back later, before the attack starts. Hahahaha" and leaved the room. Emily tried to take out Emma's rope, but they couldn't. They couldn't walk too. The rope was also tied up on there foot. Emily start speaking to Emma " What will happen to the earth? How about my mom and dad? Can we help them? What they are trying to do?" " Emily wait. Breathe. We don't know what going now. But we must take this rope out and stop them from attacking the earth" Emma explained. Emily asked “But how do we take this rope out?" " I don't know!" Emma answered. Suddenly, both of them stopped speaking.
 Four hours past, with out doing anything. They started to speak again. Emma said "It’s already four hours past. Emma had a clock. Emily continued " Two hours left" "Em" Emily heads a squeak sounds of the door and stopped speaking. It was the president. " Nice to see you again" Emily and Emma stared the president. He didn't noticed. "Two hours left." Emily speaks "Can you stop this? We want to go back home." The president says " No!" Emily and Emma were so confused what to do.

After two hours, the president came to the room again. The president said “Finally! We can have the world. Attack!” The animal’s airplane starts attacking the earth. “No! That is unfair” Emily shouted. But the president didn’t care about it and went out the room. Emily and Emma were thinking what they could do. There was no idea. “There is a piece of glass there.” said Emma. “What? We can use that and cut the rope.”Emily shouted. They reached the piece of glass and cut the ropes. The door was luckily opened. They escaped from the castle and ran to the forest. Emma brought out the airplane from the pocket and browed it. They rode that airplane and went to the space. Still they didn’t know what to do. They went back to the castle and meet the president. They meet the president. The president screamed, “How did you get out from there?” “There are more things that we want to speak to you. Please stop the attacking.”Emily asked. The president answered, “Why do we need to stop? You guys take our place were we lived. Also, the airplanes are already attacking Japan.” “I am very sorry about that. We will try our best to make the earth better and to make your living place better.” said Emily. Emma continued, “I know a planet that it is almost the same with earth. There is enough water and lands. I will show you the planet. Please stop attacking the earth.” The president thinks for five minutes. He said to the animals who are attacking the earth “Stop! And come back.” Emily and Emma feel happy at the same time.

 Emily and Emma showed them the planet and helped them make there own city. Emily said to the animals “We will make the earth better. Come back and let’s live together.”

 Emily and Emma went back to their own house and fixed the world. After that, they plant the tree seeds. Also, they were very careful about other eco friendly things, too. They tried to make the earth better, so the animals can live again, as they promised to the animals.

 The End

To be continue…

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