Wednesday, 6 November 2013

I K cut almost half!

310 to 168 words.


I was eating lunch with Katie and Eric. It was usual, but my heart tore apart while looking at them.  I realized that I like Eric. After lunch I didn’t speak with them, because I was embarrassed and felt sorry for Katie. I realized she is my best friend but I though I can steal Eric from Katie. Next day I was thinking about a plan to steal Eric, and I noticed that he doesn’t like person who cheats.

“I got an idea! I can tell Eric that Katie is cheating on him!That lunch time, I went to Eric’s   homeroom and told a lie to Eric,

I said to him, “Katie is cheating on you” she is dating with other boy.” It was a lie but he believed me.

            Next day Katie talked me with red eye. She was losing her voice, so she wrote on the note. It said “I broke up with Eric.” When I saw that, I was happy because they broke up.


One day I was eating lunch with Katie and Eric and they looked so happy. It was a usual thing, but my heart tore apart while looking at them, and I realized that I like Eric. After lunch I couldn’t speak with Eric because I was embarrassed and I couldn’t speak with Katie because I felt sorry for her. I was thinking all that night and realized she is my best friend but I can steal Eric from Katie. Suddenly, a devil inside my heart started to move. That day I couldn’t concentrate in class. I was thinking about a plan to steal Eric, and I got some information that he doesn’t like person who cheats.

“I got an idea! Maybe I can tell a lie to Eric that Katie is cheating on Eric!”so ,I decided to do that! That lunch time, I went to Eric’s   homeroom faster than Katie and told lie to Eric. I said to him, “Hey, Eric. I have to say something to you.” “What is it?”

Eric answered to me so I said “Katie is cheating on you, she is going out with other boy, and he is not in CIS. I think, I’m not sure, but I saw her in Shibuya with my own eyes!” it was a lie but he believed me, maybe because I am good at acting. Anyways, I told a lie to him and he believed me. Next day Katie talked me with red eye. I knew what happened but I asked her “what happened?” on purpose, she was losing her voice, maybe because she cried a lot. So she wrote on the note. It says “Eric said let’s broke up, and started ignoring me.” When I saw that, I was happy because

I was happy because they broke up, and Eric doesn’t like Katie anymore. It was on October.

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